On Tuesday we did a writing Story starter about a girl who got a pair of glasses,then when she puts them on she can see something …
We are learning about Discribing things so our goal was to discribe what she sees.There was a word list of intresting words we could use, I used a few of them but not all.The picture was from Poble.
I name my word The Land Of Flower Cloud, I used Insprashon from Strange word on Disny.
The Land of Flower Cloud
She couldn’t believe her eyes,There standing in front of her was a mysterious land The ground was covered with shimmering pink trees and flowers. An even more mysterious creature sat in front of her It had sparkling black scales,with extraordinary rainbow skin below them.Horns that looked as sharp as daggers protruded from the skull with muscular legs, the tail trashed on the ground making the ground tremble slightly, It was about as tall as an average nine year old and as long as a door.She gasped,It was a magnificent sight.
Do you like the discripton of the world?
Do you think the discription is good?
How long do you think it took me to write this?