Tag: Quick Write

Quick write week 1 -Term 2 

This is what my dream day would be.

Quick write week 1 -Term 2 

What does your dream day look like?

My dream day would be in a waterpark on a lake in Cromwell. I would be there with my cousins for mums side and we would have day passes. I would have my wetsuit on and would go around almost all of the slides. We would jump and do flips into the water, we would go down steep slides and not have to wait in line because everyone started leaving after a few hours. I would go on swings into the water and have the best time of my life. Me, Jesse and Nate would stay in the water for six hours only hoping out to grab some chips or cherries from Nana or Mum. We would push each other off the giant blow up goose and down the slides tricking each other that we wouldn’t push each other off then push them off. We would try the hardest obstacle in the obstacle course. On the way back to Queenstown we would buy some cherries and ice cream to snack on. 

Do you want to go to this water park?

Quick write week 1 term 2

Today we did a quick write the topic was :Would you rather live 100 years in the past or 100 years in the future? I would rather go back to the past that the future here’s why.

Would you rather live 100 years in the past or 100 years in the future?

I think that I would choose to live 100 years in the past because I could see what they did in the past. I would like to see what they ate or how they moved to work or school. I would like to learn how they got wood or made houses. If I had children I would have to do all the washing and baking and cooking. I  would probably not have a job because I don’t think that they did many jobs for women. It would be amazing to see what they had compared to what we have. I don’t want to go in to the future because I think that AI will take over the word.

 

Would you rather go in the past or the futuer?

Quick write – week 8

You work at the zoo and the elephants have broken loose! What will you do? 

If I worked at a zoo and the elephants escaped, I would get everyone out of that area of the zoo.  I would quickly grab a bucket of elephant feed and locate where they were heading to stop them.  When I stopped them I would lead them back to there cage so they don’t get lost.  If the cage was broken I would get the help of other employes to get all the elephants back in a cage so they can feel safe again. Then I would check that every elephant was there and if not I would get one of the other employes to look after the elephants we have herded back to a cage and then go look around the zoo to see if they had stayed in the zoo grounds.  If all the elephants were back in a different cage I would go and see what had spooked the elephants and if I could fix it.  The thing that had scared the elephants was … a little baby monkey sitting in the corner of the cage screaming.  This is what I think I would see if the elephants escaped there cage.

    

Do you thing that elephants would get out at a zoo?

What do you think would have scared the elephants, is it a mouse, monkey or other animals?

 

Quick write 4-week seven

Today I did a quick write. The topic was you climb to the top of the tallest tree in your neighborhood. What can you see that you couldn’t see from down below. This is the story of what I think I might see

You climb to the top of the tallest tree in your neighborhood. What can you see that you couldn’t see from down below.

 

I climbed to the top of the tree, I saw …  My neighbors dog licking at a puddle, a tourist taking a photo of the town clock ten blocks away. I saw someone jump off the Hokitika bridge head first eight miles away, the rugby game happening at Case Square with people being tackled one kilometer away. I saw one of my friends playing on there trampoline just down the street. Someone was feeding their cat two houses away. A man was walking down a street with a piece of toilet paper stuck to his boot three blocks away. I also saw the tops of cars next to me and my house I could make out exactly where my room was. I saw my dog scratching his head with his foot.

This is what I think I would see if I climbed the tallest tree in my neighbourhood.

 

What do you think you would see?

Do you think I would see these things?

 

Quick write 2 -Week 5

If you could invent anything,what would it be.

If I could invent anything I would make a robot dog because you wouldn’t have to scoop up poop or fed it. It will look and feel like a real dog because it has fur that feels real and looks real. It can play with a ball or comfort you if you feel down. People will not spend so much money on dog food, The Body and fur is waterproof so that you do not need to worry about it breaking in water.It will sound real and look real 

This is what I would make if I could invent anything.

This is my quick write for the week

What would you invent?

Quick Write -1

You can choose one new subject or sport to be taught at school what did you choose and why 

I think schools should start to teach Climbing because…

Then some more people will be able to climb. They will plant more trees so students can climb.  People will be able to enjoy the nature of trees. You will also learn how important safety is.  Some people will enjoy school a little bit better because they will not be stuck inside a cramped hot classroom.  More people will appreciate people that can climb really high. People might start to get braver. Students will get stronger and will want to go out more.  

This is why I think Schools should teach Climbing.